SCRIPT DOCTOR
IF YOUR SCREENPLAY IS NOT SELLING
ILL TELL YOU WHY
THEN SHOW YOU HOW TO FIX IT!
Comedy or Drama
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Precise script analysis
Clear & concise explanations of how to fix script problems
Touch-ups or complete script rewrites
Compelling Log Lines
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Comedy - making your funny script funnier
· punching up witty dialog
· creating clever sight gags
· writing slapstick action scenes
· developing zany characters
(25 years experience as a teacher, writer and editor of comedy)
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Drama - strengthening the story arc
· structuring the three acts
· action-packed scene construction
· developing interesting characters
· writing realistic dialog
· powerful endings
For more info, price quotes, and turnaround time, call 310-479-1496 ,
or
Email Cliff
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