SCRIPT DOCTOR


IF YOUR SCREENPLAY IS NOT SELLING

I’LL TELL YOU WHY—

THEN SHOW YOU HOW TO FIX IT!

Comedy or Drama

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Precise script analysis

Clear & concise explanations of how to fix script problems

Touch-ups or complete script rewrites

Compelling Log Lines

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Comedy - making your funny script funnier
· punching up witty dialog
· creating clever sight gags
· writing slapstick action scenes
· developing zany characters

(25 years experience as a teacher, writer and editor of comedy)

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Drama - strengthening the story arc
· structuring the three acts
· action-packed scene construction
· developing interesting characters
· writing realistic dialog
· powerful endings




For more info, price quotes, and turnaround time, call
310-479-1496 ,
or

Email Cliff

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