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EDITING PROCESS
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ABOUT EDITING
Communication is your reason for
being -- not nourishment of ego, not praise of colleagues, not money, not love of
generations to come. You write to communicate to the hearts and minds of others what's
burning inside you. Arthur Plotnik, editor, novelist, and reporter, once said, "And
we edit to let the fire show through the smoke."
If an author's greatest fear of
"being edited" is appearing less than brilliant, an editor's greatest insight is
to see that without revision the author's genius will be obscured.
What exactly is editing?
Editing is both an art (having a
perceptive "ear" for content) and craft (knowing "the rules" of
style). The two main levels of editing are content editing and copy (line) editing.
Content editing is macro editing; copy editing is micro editing. Content editing focuses
on voice (point of view), organization, pacing, flow, consistency of ideas and terms, plus
troubleshooting for offensive ideas, corniness, etc. Copy editing (or line editing)
focuses on error finding: grammar, sentence/passage structures, punctuation, spelling,
etc.
Often the same editor is used for
both content and copy editing. In fact, both steps can be done simultaneously. However, it
is always a good idea to later use a separate proofreader. The more eyes on the manuscript
the better.
What is the editor's job?
The editor is responsible for
preserving and improving what the author is trying to say. An editor shapes the expression
of an author's thoughts, not the thoughts themselves, unless the author consents.
Why is an editor necessary, especially if the author is a
good writer and/or a professional editor?
The
author is always too close to his or her work ("baby") to be objective; it's
almost impossible for the author to see the gaps, redundancies, and distractions that are
instantly apparent to the reader. Additionally, the author represents his or her subject
and interests. The editor represents the reader.
The editor is responsible for satisfying
the author's audience. Thus, the editor always puts the reader first...and (sorry!) the
author's feelings second. Authors who opt not to have their manuscripts edited risk
alienating their audience.
What's the difference between editing and rewriting?
The editor may rewrite passages of a
manuscript when necessary to promote momentum. However, if the entire manuscript needs to
be rewritten, that task belongs to the author or a ghostwriter.
Where in the process does the editor come in?
With nonfiction, an author ideally
runs his or her outline by an editor before writing. This is essentially what happens when
an author/agent shops a book proposal -- consisting of a query letter, outline, and sample
chapter -- to an editor at a publishing house. Feedback is invaluable, and much more
efficient at this stage.
With fiction, the author writes,
self-edits, rewrites, self-edits, and so on, to the best of his or her ability. Then the
author works with an editor to tackle content and style issues. After final editing and
polishing has been completed and the book has been formatted (in layout or
"galley" form), the author/publisher has a proofreader review it for final
error-catching. Proofreaders will also catch layout errors at this stage, such as bad line
breaks or pagination problems.
What does an editor look for? -- What is the editing
process?
A good editor follows clear style
guidelines. Most use the Chicago Manual of Style, 14th edition -- the closest thing to
America's national style guide. But an editor must also be perceptive enough to know when,
and how, to break the rules. This is only advisable for established authors.
The following list includes areas that editors (and writers)
should consider when reviewing a manuscript.
Fiction Checklist
 | Characterization |
 | Point of View (POV) |
 | Plot |
 | Show (scenes) vs. Tell (narrative)
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 | Dialogue |
 | Setting |
 | Description |
 | Language |
 | Gingerbread (frames, flashbacks,
foreshadowing, prologue/epilogue, frills: diary entries, letters, poetry, news articles,
novel within a novel) |
 | Voice (emotional status of character)
|
 | Tone (how author wants reader to
interpret emotional content) |
 | Theme (integral ideas that aren't
overtly explained but implied) |
 | Grammar and Mechanics (spelling,
punctuation, paragraphing, sentence structures, verb tenses, passive voice, appropriate
vocabulary) |
 | Presentation (for agent or publisher)
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 | Length (appropriate to genre) |
Nonfiction Checklist
 | Organization |
 | Research/ Knowledge of Subject
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 | Focus on Topic |
 | Originality of Topic |
 | Author's Credentials |
 | Marketability |
 | Presentation of Material
(accessibility) |
 | Targeted to a Specific Audience
|
 | Format (one of following:
argumentative; concept and case histories; chronological; true story; personal essay
collection; channeled) |
 | Tone |
 | Clear, Precise Language |
 | Sound, Logical Argument |
 | Quotes & Paraphrased Material
Properly Attributed |
 | Sufficient Use of Others' Works to
Support Argument |
 | Sufficient Examples, Anecdotes
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 | Grammar and Mechanics (spelling,
punctuation, paragraphing, sentence structures, verb tenses, passive voice, appropriate
vocabulary) |
Every author's manuscript benefits from the deft touch of a
competent editor. Then surely readers can more clearly see the "fire show through the
smoke."
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